Fictional Story

Author's Note: This story is the second part of the three pieces that I did with a group up in the front of the room, and  they all connect with this one.  I am also trying to stop repeating things over when I don't have to. I am also trying not to be too descriptive, but I am also trying to describe things so people don't get confused easily. I am also working on the punctuation.  The stories that connect with this one are,  The Worst Appointment Ever, and The Horrible Circus Clown. Please comment on what I could fix, and what was confusing, so I can fix it and make it better.

Chapter 1 – The Message

As Robert ran from the doctor's office, he ran into a student, who yelled, "Hey watch were you're going!"

Robert replied to him, "Sorry, the dentist just pulled out my tooth, and the tissue in my mouth was red with blood."

A girl told the student. "Leave him alone Nathan, he's just a little kid."

Nathan replied to Robert, "You should be careful around middle school students, they can lose their temper easily."

The girl told him, "He's telling you the truth, the students at our school fight with other students often." 

Nathan said to the girl, "Come on Jade, we promised Steve and Trisha that we would meet them at the circus because we haven’t seen them since 2004."

Jade replied to Nathan, "You're right, we better go before they get mad at us." 

Nathan asked Robert, "You want to come with us, it's my way of saying sorry for almost punching you."

Robert suprisely asked Nathan, "Really?"

"Sure, it will be fun,” Nathan replied.

“Okay I will go, if my mom says it’s okay,” Robert said.

Nathan asked Robert,  “How old are you?" 

"My name is Robert, and  I'm 11, how old are you two?" Robert asked Nathan and Jade

Nathan replied,  "I'm 14, and she's 13." 

When they got to Robert’s, and asked his mom if they could come she said, “As long as he’s back by dinner at 5:00,” And when that was done, they left for the circus. 

"It's about time that you guys got here, we have been waiting for an hour!" A stranger told Nathan and Jade.

Jade replied to the guy that asked, "Sorry, Nathan almost beat up this kid for running into him, and as an apology, we invited him, but we had to ask his mom, she didn't mind because we were old enough to be babysit, but we consider it hanging out."

He replied, "I'm Steve, and that's Trisha, we are both 14 and you are?"

Robert replied to Steve, "My name is Robert, I am 11 years old."

A kid yelled,  "I am not afraid, I am not afraid, I AM NOT AFRAID!"

"What's your problem?" Trisha asked the kid.

The kid told them, "I...I used to be afraid of clowns, and I still don't like them, but I am going to overcome my fear of clowns."

Robert walked up to the kid and asked, "Who are you?"

The kid replied,  "My name is Henry, and I'm 9, and don't run when I tell you this, but I was in a mental hospital for a month, and during that time I got something amazing, come with me and I will show you." they followed him and when they got to a private place, he got out two glowing wings, Henry told them,  "These were given to me, and they prevent nightmares."

"That's crazy," Jade said,  "but that doesn't mean it isn't true." 

Nathan told her, "You believe everything, Jade, like the time I told you that there was 100 dollars buried in the school’s yard." 

They decided that this kid might be crazy, but he is only 9 so he will believe anything, so they decided to let him come with them.

The announcer shouted, "Welcome to our circus, and to spice things up, the clowns will come out first." When Henry heard that, he started hyperventilating.

"Calm down, I've been here tons of times, the clowns won't hurt you." Trisha comforted Henry, and he calmed down.

When the last clown came out, Henry almost freaked out, and even worse, the clown was heading right towards him.

Before the clown had a chance to say anything Henry yelled at him, "STAY AWAY FROM ME YOU EVIL CLOWN!"

The clown quietly whispered to Henry, “There is nothing that can stop me, I will get my revenge.” 

Suddenly everything went black, and when the  lights came back on, the clown was gone, and everybody except Trisha, Steve, Nathan, Jade, Henry, and Robert, were gone, they all gasped, and in the middle of the stage was a note. Nathan picked it up and written on it was,

Trisha, Steve, Nathan, Jade, Henry, and Robert, you have been selected, go to the old mansion at the end of Death Street, and when you get there, two people will be waiting, they will train you to fight the evil that is going to attack Earth. Good luck.

The note disintegrated into nothing after they read it. They all looked at each other and they didn’t know what to do. Steve asked, “Well should we go or not?”

“It could be a prank,” Jade said.

Henry responded “I think we should go.”

“You must not be from where we are, the old mansion is a dark old abandoned house, and is dark 24 hours of the day,” Jade said.

Nathan added, “But then again, Jade and me are the only people from Westernsun City, where the place is famous.” They left for Dark City, and when they arrived, they took the bus to Death Street.

“This is the old mansion?” Robert asked.

Nathan responded, “Yes, and a true story, I witnessed it myself, a kid went in there, and when the police checked the house, they didn’t find the kid, they found his ghost.”

“Is that really true?” Henry asked.

Nathan responded, “Yes.”

They all stood there, unsure if they should go in or not.

Chapter 2 – The Truth

Nathan walked up to the door, and right before he opened the door, it opened by itself.

“Come in,” a voice told them. They walked in the door where two people were waiting for them.

“Nick, take Nathan with you, you have to tell him the truth,” the person on the left told the other.

Nick responded, “Yes, I will take him to the room in the back.” Nick walked up a set of stairs and told Nathan to follow him, once they were up the stairs he told Nathan to sit down. “Nathan, you come from a long line of fighters, your grandparents were the chosen ones, the two who were destined to defeat the evil. Your mother was the child of the chosen ones, who also part of a prophecy, and your father was the last of his kind, the last of a long line of Alsors, the greatest fighters the universe has ever seen, but sadly, they all perished long ago,

“What?” Nathan asked Nick, confused.

Nick continued, ignoring Nathan’s question, “Every other fighter in the universe, besides me and Danielle, who was the person who told me to tell you this all perished by the same foe. The last person in your family who was alive was your cousin, whose life was also ended by the same evil who defeated your grandparents.” Nathan was sitting there staring into space, Nick finished, “And the only person who was powerful enough disappeared a long time ago.”

Meanwhile. . .

“So what do you think we can do, if what you say is true, then why do you think we can do?” Steve asked the other person. Right at that moment, Nathan and Nick came down the stairs.

. . .

Ten months have passed, and everybody has gotten 20 times stronger than they were when they arrived.

In a small city called Easternsun City, life was normal, the kids were in school, the parents were at work, and all of the people at NEWS (North, East, West, and South) College were on their laptops, working. Suddenly a blue alien flew down on to Main Rd., when a semi – truck drove down the road, the driver got out of the truck and started yelling at the alien, but then he froze with fear when he saw the alien, he was about 7 feet tall, had a tail with a stinger at the end, he had claws on his hands and feet and had wings like an eagle, he walked up to the semi – truck, and flung it into the air, and shot a weird laser out of his hand and blew up the semi, then suddenly the Easternsun City army came down the road.

The military commander yelled in his microphone at the alien, “Put your hands up, we have you surrounded.” There were news helicopters everywhere recoding the battle, and the reporters were spitting out words. The alien grabbed one of the tanks, and threw a smoke bomb. And the alien used that importunity to fly in the air and fire a laser at everything  in the area, which caused a huge explosion and the whole city was reduced to rubble. The alien headed towards Northernsun City, where he also reduced it to rubble. He did the same with Westernsun City and then Southernsun City. But before he left for Centralsun City, a mysterious stranger flew down behind him.

Chapter 3 – The Mystery

As soon as Trisha, Steve, Nathan, Jade, Henry, and Robert saw the news report they headed to each of the cities to find out what happened, and they had no luck until they went to Southernsun City, where they saw the alien.

“Who’s that one on the right?” Jade asked.

“I think that’s the thing that destroyed those cities.” Nathan responded.

Suddenly, without warning, the two started fighting, and they were both so fast that you couldn’t see them, and after a minute they both stopped. Suddenly they both disappeared.

“Let’s pretend that this didn’t happen.” Henry told them. When they returned to the mansion, Nick and the other stranger where waiting for them.

“Where were you guys?” Nick asked them when they entered.

“We thought we were about to fight the evil.” Robert replied.

“Danielle, I think it is time to tell them the truth.” Nick told Danielle.

“Yes, they should know the truth.” She responded.

“The truth is that you aren’t going to fight aliens, you are going to fight something else,” Nick told them.

Chapter 4 – The Complete Truth

“Something else?” Jade asked.

“Five years ago, when the United States found the five islands off the coast of Alaska, they found a special substance in a cave on Central Island. The city is now known and Centralsun City, and they discovered that the substance could be used to create the weapons that they have been working on, Super Soldiers. These aren’t normal soldiers, they are special soldiers that have had special training, and they are also given suits that make them nearly invincible, and these suits give the soldiers abilities that every human could dream of.” Danielle told them.

“Yes, they are given powers that superheroes have, you know, super strength, the power to fly, etcetera,” Nick added.

“Isn't that a good thing?” Steve asked them.

Danielle replied, “No, because there is one side effect to the substance, it is a strange substance, it is worse than any other substance on Earth, even more destructive than Anti – Matter. But that isn’t the problem, the problem is if it gets on a normal human, it turns their aura as dark as a bottomless pit, and there is no cure.” Danielle paused,  “Sadly that has happened, for I saw it myself, it happened four years ago, a girl living in Centralsun City walked into the cave, and when I followed her, I saw her turn completely evil, because instead of being exposed to a small amount of the substance, she had fallen into the giant pool in the deepest part of the cave, though the good news is that all of the substance from the pool is gone. The bad news is because the girl fell in the pool.”

“That’s horrible, what happened to the girl?” Trisha asked.

“Because she was exposed to so much of the substance, she turned far more evil than anything anyone has ever seen on Earth,” Nick responded.

“Something that evil has been on Earth for four years?” Steve asked.

“Yes, and when the scientists found her and took back to examine her, she woke up and destroyed the lab, and the whole continent with her, that is what happened to Australia, it wasn’t hit by a meteor and sank into the ocean, it was destroyed,” Danielle replied. 

Nick told them, “We believe that the other reason that the girl is evil is because her soul has been taken over by a darkness that lived in the pool.” 

. . .

Ten years have passed since the mysterious substance was discovered in the cave in Centralsun City, nine years have passed since the girl fell in the pool of goo, and five years have passed since Nathan and his friends were told about the suspicious cave, but what they didn’t know was that the goo wasn’t the current problem, it was something far worse.

“What is it Nick?” Nathan asked Nick.

“He’s probably just wondering why we haven’t encountered the evil we are destined to encounter,” Trisha answered.

“No, it isn’t that, it’s just that the prophecy said that the prophecy said that the five that were supposed to defeat the evil would unlock  their special powers within a year, and Henry and Robert still haven’t, and they are much weaker than the rest of you,” Danielle answered.

“Hey look, a note!” Robert shouted, pointing at the note.

Nathan picked up the note. He told them, “I know what we have to do.” 

Chapter 5 – Crystals and Shards

“So we are supposed to go to each if the four islands, retrieve some kind of weird orb from a cave, take them to Centralsun City, go to some kind of weird circle thing and put each of the orbs in some kind of holder, and then a cave will appear?” Robert asked Nathan.

“Yes, it seems pretty straight forward.” Nathan responds.

. . .  

“Wow, that was really easy.” Jade told them.

“Yes too easy, this final cave must be much more difficult than the other ones.” Nathan tells them.

When they enter the cave, two girls were at the entrance.

“Who are you?” Steve asked the two girls.

“We’ve been expecting you, I’m Crystal, and that’s Shard,”

“Those are odd names,” Henry tells Crystal and Shard.

“That is because we were born in a cave,”  Shard responded.

“We know why you are here, and we are one step ahead,  we have the item you want,” Crystal tells them while she takes out a orb with rainbow – like colors waving around the orb.

“What is that?” Robert asks.

“It does not have a name, but it can help you defeat the dark evil,” Shard tells them, and hands the orb to Nathan.

“Why haven’t we encountered the evil?” Nathan asks.

“That is because the evil is growing, the United States created the Super Soldiers, but they went out of control, and the girl took control, and are getting more powerful, but that orb will allow you to defeat the evil,” Crystal tells them and they both walk away into the cave.

When they got back to the mansion, they notice that it is under attack by the Super Soldiers.  

“Why would they attack the mansion?” Henry asked.

“How do they even know that we are training there?” Trisha asked the others.

“I don’t know, maybe with us always coming in and out that they saw us,” Steve guessed.

Robert told them, “I think that they have a spy, because I saw someone spying on the house, and when I came out, he ran away.”

“When?” Jade asked Robert.

“I think it was a few days ago,” Robert told them.

“Why didn’t you tell us?”  Jade asked Robert.

“I didn’t think it was important,” Robert told them.

Right at that moment Nick and Danielle came out and started fighting the enemies, and within a few minutes the whole attack force retreated.

“There is a bomb in there, that is why we came out here, we would have stayed inside, where we had the advantage,” Danielle told them.

“What should we do now?” Henry asked.

Nick told everybody, “We strike back.”

“How?” Jade asked Nick.

“You got the orb from Crystal and Shard right?” Danielle asked them.

“Yes,”  Henry told Nick and Danielle, “but I’m wondering, where is Nathan?”

I know I should have told the others what my plan was, but I must stop the soldiers by myself. I’m just glad that I brought the orb. But what is so important about this orb? Nathan thought to himself as his stood on the hill above the factory. According to Crystal and Shard, this is the factory where they will use the substance to create the ultimate army. He thought to himself. Suddenly the factory blew up.

Chapter 6 – The Mysterious New Enemy

After  they got the bomb out before it exploded, there was still one question, where was Nathan? Right at that moment Nathan walked in to the house and fell to the ground.

“Nathan!” Trisha yelled.

“He’s unconscious, but he’s still breathing,” Jade pointed out, “what,  I took a CPR class in third grade.”

“Look he’s waking up,” Henry told them.

“They came out of nowhere and attacked me without warning, they were far more powerful than anything I have ever faced before, and before I passed out, I heard them say something about searching for Jayden, or something about a raven, I couldn’t tell,” Nathan said, talking to himself.

“Nathan, did you get a good look at them?” Jade asked Nathan.

“What?” Nathan asked.

“Did you get a good look at the things that attacked you?” Henry asked.

Nathan told them, “Yes, the one that attacked me first looked like a boy about 13 or 14, he was about five feet four and had black hair, and the other one was the same, it looked like a girl the same age, but that is all I can remember about them.” 

Jade told him, “You probably just got attacked by two teenagers who were angry at their parents and let it out on you.” 

“No, their attacks were far too powerful for them to be teenagers. It was brief, but I sensed a dark and evil energy, whatever they are, they are not human,” Nathan said.

“Well, you said they looked like humans right?” Steve asked.

“Yes, they looked like two normal teenagers,” Nathan replied.

“That makes things difficult, was there anything that made them stand out?” Nick asked.

Nathan told them, “No, but I think they might be Joey and Brooke, the two who died when a building mysteriously exploded, mysteriously because the police had explosion radars, which can sense a bomb, or what caused the explosion, and when they used one the machine said that there was no bomb, which almost caused chaos in Centralsun City’s government.”

“What should we do?” Henry asked.

Chapter 7 – The Revenge

Nathan revealed that the girl that fell in the goo, the Super Soldiers, and the mysterious blue alien that attack the four cities was not the threat to worry about, but that the mysterious duo that attacked him was the threat to worry about, and now, the mysterious duo whose plan is unknown, are going after someone named Jayden.

“Did you really have to attack that kid without warning?” a girl asked the boy next to her.

“Yes,  Brooke, it was good training, for when get revenge on the person who sent us to this planet, and if that means we have to eliminate all life on Earth, then that is what we will do.” The boy responded.

Suddenly, a car drives down the road, and when it drives past Brooke and the boy, the boy steps out on the road, grabs the car, flings the driver out and gets in the car.

“What was that for Joey?” Brooke asked Joey.

“Stop asking questions and get in the car,” Joey replies.

She responds, “Fine, I was getting tired of walking anyways.” 

The driver grabs his phone and calls the police to tell them his car has been stolen.

After driving the stolen car for about twenty minutes, a police barricade stops them, so they get out of the car and once the police are done putting handcuffs on them and telling them why they were arrested they break the handcuffs and throw the police cars out of their way, the police immediately call for back – up.

“Let’s get out of here Joey,” Brooke tells Joey.

“Let’s show them something that they won’t believe,” Joey replies, and then they fly into the air.

Joey tells Brooke, “This is much better than driving a stolen car, and the police won’t be able catch us, now let’s show them what happens when they mess with us.” 

“How much longer will it be until we destroy something, destroying that factory wasn't enough.” Brooke asked.